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Thump!
by Karen Schnee - Friday, July 9, 2010, 11:54 AM
 

Enjoyed the pace and "voice" that relayed an embarrassing moment.  Nice control of language, "wished he'd melted into the ice," and "flush red" to name two.  Since we all remember being embarrassed in our youth, the details took me back to my own "slip," not on ice but onto a large banner that had been freshly painted to hang in my 2nd grade class.  I was a mess, it was messier.

Scored this a 5.

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