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Re: Are Olympic Morning Finals a Big Deal?
by Sharmane Miller - Friday, March 5, 2010, 7:04 PM
 
I also gave this paper a score of four because I thought the writer gave relevant details to enrich his main point.  He seemed to be writing from a fairly good knowledge base of the subject matter.  However, there were times when he simply repeated information and this made it seem as though he was grasping frantically for more to say.  Quite frankly, he could have ended the essay much sooner than he did and it still would have conveyed his ideas well enough to score high for the ideas trait.