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I couldn't agree more. I was thoroughly impressed with this author's ability to reflect maturly about her current stage in life, a task that is seemingly difficult for young teens; however, I also believe that this essay earned a score of 3 due to the lack of specific, thought provoking, unique details. I feel the author concentrated on offering many broad generalities but didn't take the time to dive into any single idea, something I believe strong "idea" writers are able to do. I believe this is definitely a writer who is experimenting with his/her writing and has much promise!