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memory cloud, middle school
by Karen Schnee - Friday, July 2, 2010, 11:01 AM
 
What a "first" paper to post.  Titles that word are a huge hit with me, and this totally worked.  A "must" to read aloud to a class.  The rhetorical questions, although I encourage students not to overuse, pulled reader towards last sentence, remembering Kindra.  And as the audience, haven't we ALL experienced memory clouds?  Even if not from death of a loved one?  An old friend?  First home??  Traumatic moment???  Brief, also.  All was said.