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Uninvited Guests (4th Grade)
by Rachel Desena - Wednesday, July 1, 2015, 9:41 PM

I scored this paper a 2 because the ideas were really unclear to me.  I know the writer is discussing ghosts potentially living somewhere but it is very broad and I am not sure what his point is.  He doesnt seem to sure about his point either because he contradicts himself a few times.  I was left with a lot of questions after reading this piece hence the 2.